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Post by Aniya on Aug 29, 2009 9:47:04 GMT -5
A ghostly frame stood upon the borders of Suprise's lands. Elegantly carved cranium held low as the equine searched it's surroundings. Deziya, once the lady of Mystical Forest now completely alone it seemed...Letting one last echoing call ring over the land to her lost lover. She hadn't layed eyes upon her love in 6 months or so and she no longer felt this land held anything for her. Waiting a few moments to see if Suprise would actually show up and try to keep her from leaving or would he simply stand back and watch her leave. |
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Aug 30, 2009 3:31:20 GMT -5
Surprise stood beneath the dead gum tree on the border. His head swayed feebly as he fought his thoughts and depression. His mares had left, his foals had disappeared, his own adopted daughter had left him. Nobody wanted him apart from Vital and Deziya. Yet even then he could not bring himself to talk to them. he had feebly been trying to protect the borders from stallions sensing his weakness. Yet now he could easily give up. His listeners once more repeated the sound of his beloved's call. He shook his head angrily, signaling the only effort to use energy. He had heard Deziya's many call in the long time he had been standing there, half a year. It was a well-known sound, like music to his shabby twin-sets.His ribs poked out and his condition was horrible. Tresses hung in limp bangs, dull and dusty. His once rich golden bay coat was patchy and limp, hanging to his skull like a skinned animal pelt on a tree. Suddenly his head flung up in surprise. Ha. Living up to his name.
This time the call was different. It had a longing to it, a desperate need. It was unlike the lullabic,sweet call of joy in his head. It was calling him. He threw his head up higher. For once he had heard his lover's call. He nickered. The sound sounded throaty and alien, unrecognizable to be his. He looked down upon his feet, uncertain on what to do.Suddenly he realised. He must return after 6 months of rejection,depression and mental uncontrolled, he would return. Oh how embarrassed to be seen this way. his picked his hooves up and gently placed them back down. The effort drained his energy of the little he had, but he must keep going. He picked each one up one by one and made his way along the border. He called again fro his beloved, yet still his nicker was throaty and alien, like sandpaper rasping. He thought frantically. She would not know it was him....and leave. He frantically tried to go faster. He did not care about being embarrassed now. He needed Deziya.
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Post by Aniya on Aug 30, 2009 23:02:05 GMT -5
So this was the end of the line for the two of them, turning her alabaster cranium towards the cold eastern winds to leave. The haunting sound that held slight familiarity caused the dove to perk her twin sets to the sound, Deziya's heart began to race. Could it be her beloved Suprise, was he truely coming for her or was it her imagination running away with her as it had so many times before. Long muscular pillars turned sharply to push the vix back across the line of Chocolate Suprise's border, standing once again within in lome she waited.
A soft hopeful call escaped her velvets before she could try and stop it, icy blue visionaries franticly searching the land before her. Surely it hadn't been just in her mind...hadn't he loved her at all? Would he just stand back now and watch as his beloved Deziya walked away to return to the claiming grounds to fall prey to another. Though her heart would always belong to this one stallion, never would one posses it as he had. Muscular nape pushed her elegant dome into the icy air once again. Standing on the border line giving him precious few moments to show his face before leaving for good. Winter would be tough this year but she would gladly stand beside him through thick and thin just as she had for months now...watching everyone, including their only son, walk away. Never to show their faces here again. But none had the faith in Suprise as she did...he was her one and only love and now he was her only hope.
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Aug 31, 2009 3:54:56 GMT -5
Surprise flung up his skull, freezing as he saw his beloved dove about to cross the line. She seemed troubled, her cotton colored skull cocked like she was listening to some unheard sound.Surprise purposely stepped on a twig. The ringing sharp crack rebounded on the tree's and Surprise stepped forward briskly. The words tumbled form his mouth like water over a rainfall. "Deziya" He murmured "My sweet Deziya. I did not mean to leave you. You and Vital. I only needed time to think, time to get away. Faynan has now left, The missing mares not found. Selene has left me. The time drew out. Your calls were like music to my ears, yet I swore I imagined them half the time. Please accept me back, I will get the herd up and running again. Please my sweet Deziya. You are my true love, one I would die without. Please accept me back" He stumbled and stuttered, his facade of perfect articulation and form long gone. His mental kingdom of his land had tumbled, and he was in mental ruins. |
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Post by Aniya on Aug 31, 2009 17:33:40 GMT -5
Upon the sight of the shaggy dirt colored titan, duo's pinned to her skull in defense. Only once he was within close enough range that she could smell him did she calm, listeners perked to attention and a soft nicker escaping her voice box as she approached him slowly. Suprise's words came in a rush and flooded her brain but he was here so leaving was no longer an option. By the look of him, she was needed greatly.
"Suprise, my love, what has happened to you?"
Deziya asked as she circled him slowly, letting her velvety muzzle caress over his rugged pelt lovingly. Letting herself see him fully, the way his ribs protruded from his form and how poorly he looked. Rubbing her silky pelt along his structure before letting herself stop along side him, her muzzle rubbing along his sharp jawline. A soft sigh escaped her as she lovingly caressed him, standing protective as if he were a young foal that couldn't defend himself.
"I will not leave you my love...I thought you no longer wished me here."
Her voice soft and only for him to hear, suprised that he had shown to keep her and a little heart hurt at the sight of her once mighty stallion. Suprise could very easily perish this season, it was always the most dangerous. Keeping her bodice pressed against his still more masculine form letting their pelts caress one another as they had years ago.
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Sept 3, 2009 1:54:04 GMT -5
Surprise tossed his skull back as his love pinned her listeners and turned on defense, reading to protect the land she cared for. Soft sigh escaped her as she recognized him, his chocolate colored eyes and his proud and strong form. She scented him, a soft nicker escaping her as she ran her maw on him, caressing and calming him. Her question was left unanswered as a gentle pause came between them. Retorical question. Even if it wasn't , Surprise made it one.
Deziya shielded him as he sighed, his legs weary from the short distance he had traveled to find his love. "How could I no longer want you here? Deziya you are my soul mate, my other half, my lover and my friend. I wish you never to leave" He said, his voice raspy and scratchy from in use. He tossed his skull and renewed his effort to be strong. His chocolate eyes were hollow and dull.
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Post by Aniya on Sept 8, 2009 16:25:11 GMT -5
Alabaster hued dove stood silently beside the chocolate stallion, her weight gently rubbing against his comfortingly. Snorting softly as she watched her beloved and how weak he seemed.
"Perhaps we should get you something to eat, there is a nice patch of grass down next to the stream. I want to make sure your going to make it through my love."
Rubbing her muzzle under his wiskery chin and let her bodice slide out from beside his so that she could lead him towards the patch of grass. Swishing her long cotton hued train before taking a few slow steps away from him.
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Sept 28, 2009 2:07:22 GMT -5
ooc: Sorry I took so long! I forgot about the thread lol. Bad post...
Surprise craned his neck as he slowly walked towards the stream. He shook his head and nipped her a little playfully. "Just you and I now. Everyone else has left" He said. He had seen them all leave or be killed.
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Post by Aniya on Sept 28, 2009 9:37:37 GMT -5
Deziya stood quietly watching her beloved Suprise, icy orbs keeping him within sight at all times.
"I am aware of that as well. It is a tragidy...but there are always more mares..."
She didn't mean for that to sound rude, and he would know that because he knew her. Hardly ever did Deziya say anything rude about anyone. Dipping her skull slowly to graze upon the grasses. Fall was beginning to turn the leaves and she knew that winter would fast be approaching.
[ooc: Yeah that was a bad post too. It's alright. I knew you would get back to it when you remembered...hows your leg?]
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Sept 28, 2009 20:23:15 GMT -5
Surprise gently nuzzled his lady and gently cropped at the sweet grass. His ears were perked as he tore at the sweet blades, listening to his love's words. His skull raised and he nuzzled her "Yes there will be more mares" He said without looking at her directly. He turned to Deziya directly and asked her "Deziya, I know I am weak right now, but this herd needs to show how strong we are. Stallions may target us. While I am recruiting more mares, I wish the gift of new life to come into this herd as well. Will you carry my foal once again, my love?" Surprise asked. His voice was stronger and he held his head with confidence.
occ: Thanks. I feel better! 
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Post by Aniya on Sept 29, 2009 19:20:48 GMT -5
Deziya let the thought run through her brain for a moment as she stood chewing a few ripe blades of grass. She's been wanting another foal sense Faynan had disappeared and she hadn't seen him again. Nodding her skull slowly before nuzzling his shoulder lovingly.
"Yes I happily carry your foal Suprise."
Turning slowly to head to the breeding grounds, their second foal would be hopefully a new start for their lands.
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Sept 29, 2009 20:38:05 GMT -5
Surprise waited for her answer. Her words sent joy through his heart and he snorted happily.Surprise watched the cotton painted mare leave and he follow. He found new strength at the thought. He trotted after the mare, his steps perky as he happily thought of the idea of making love with his love
--AFTER--
Surprise returned, lurking in the trees. His orbs scoured over the land as he sensed his mare returning, freshly claimed. He nickered for Deziya as she cautiously picked through the bushes and grass. "My new mare has returned" He said, happy that he had fufilled his promise to Deziya. |
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Post by Aniya on Oct 2, 2009 0:53:48 GMT -5
Carefully crossing back into her lover's terra, Deziya moved slowly waiting for Odet to dance along after her. From the moment of her birth the filly was joyful, like her mother. Dancing gracefully for the simple joy of it, the way the snow felt upon her velvety muzzle or the way the sun warmed her pelt in such as way to cause goose bumps. Deziya smiled at the way the filly had laughed at the word. Glancing back at the cotton hued daughter that looked up happily as she stuck her nose under her dam to nurse.
The vix spotted Suprise a little ways away and nickered happily to him. Not wanting to take their daughter around any mare that she, herself didn't know, just yet. Duo's perked forwards and head held high with pride, waiting to show off her gorgeous daughter.
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Post by ::MakybeDiva428:: on Oct 2, 2009 1:13:30 GMT -5
Surprise snorted and returned Deziya's nicker, his orbs shining. his pillars carried him through the forest. His new mare was somewhere in the forest, her scent lingered but she was not with Surprise. Surprise tossed his head in delight, seeing the small filly beside his snow-blessed wonder. Surprise stopped a little distance away, wondering if Deziya would allow him closer
He paused, hesitating before trotting forward. Deziya would see him as no threat, and he wanted to see his firstborn daughter. He snorted and nuzzled Deziya, neck glad she had birthed safely
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Post by Aniya on Oct 5, 2009 20:59:45 GMT -5
The alabaster dove nuzzled Suprise's neck lovingly, she was exosted yet she wanted him to meet their daughter. Glancing back at the snowy figure that stood beside deziya, her muzzle drinking greedily from her dam. Giving a soft call to the filly to get her attention.
Odet snorted softly as she pulled her nose from beneath her mother's warm barrel, looking up at her sire with dark chocolate orbs. Their dark depths looking almost black in the morning light. Extending her muzzle to the large stallion in a greeting, flicking her short fluffy tail back and forth as her curiosity rose at the sight of her father.
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